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Okaaay, so here's my first piece in like forever. Its only 1/8th complete and I really need some ideas on how to finish it/improve it. Its for my Dad's planning company, and he likes the overall theme, but what I'm looking for is how to refine it. How to finish it.. I don't know, I've got a couple ideas now but it needs some more input. Please comment! I don't care if you're like "its gay, ur gay, web design is gay, you suck, get a real job" etc.. as long as you have some constructive criticism to go with it.. please!

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:iconeario:
Well, everything looks really good except for the sidebar color... grey doesn't really fit in.. seems a little dull.. :) Great work on the header and overall, the rest of the design.. :) Also, I'd suggest using a different font and a little lighter color on the links and the header titles.. :)

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:iconthe-ace-chef:
Looks awesome. The grey to white material transition at the top seems a little harsh, and the grey wood on the sides looks slightly out of place. Amazing work on the headers and titles.
:iconaapis:
Yeah, I originally had it totally different and left that for some reason. Now that you mention it I see it too, thanks. :)

The grey wood stuff is pretty much temporary for now, that was the best wood texture a 5 second Google search could find. Basically just to show him what it could look like.

Thanks for the inpiut!

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:iconthe-ace-chef:
Your welcome, It looks like it could become quite a fantastic website :)
:iconaapis:
Yeah, that'll be changing as soon as I can find a suitable texture to use. :) Different font is a great idea, but I don't understand your last comment as the header titles are white. ;) The links yes, I also have an idea for better utilization of that sidebar now anyways so they may not even look like that next time I update this.

Thanks mate!

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Thanks a lot!

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